托福獨立寫作真題范文 | 老師,留作業啦!
2020-10-30
獨立寫作題目
“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should assign homework that students must do every day.”
寫作范文
Introduction
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Body
(以主體部分的一個段落為例,演示論證過程)
中心句的寫作技法:留出信息空白(leave blanks): This frequency is too high and thereby exhausting and counterproductive. 接下來解釋為什么 too high和exhausting:It is obvious that a student who has to do homework Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and all the way through Sunday does not have even one day off and feels exhausted. As a result, exhaustion leads to poor learning effectiveness. ← 措辭點:名詞化有“逼格”的表達方式 // 描述性的創造“畫面感”的表達方式 →when the student is tired, he or she is barely learning anything. 用短句套話引導后面的內容:A further consequence is worse. Many cases indicate that the student is highly likely to develop a strong aversion to study because his or her mind may be overloaded and stuck. 如果統一于前一句的風格,應該是第二種表達方式。As a matter of fact, the proposed arrangement is tiresome for not only students but also teachers. It takes plenty of intellectual work to give proper assignments, and the daily basis is not easy. Meanwhile, marking those assignments is also a heavy load of work.
Conclusion
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